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Poetry for my Novel

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The Brother My Heart Chose

Calix to Riodan

When we first met, I didn’t notice.

Of course, I was younger then. I didn’t realize

that someone one had hurt my friend.


Someone had cut him to the bone- to the very

wick of his being. He had not gotten better,

but at least I could make him smile. And he made

me smile too. I was pretty easy to make smile,

but I know he loved to see me happy. As I got

to know him, I realized there was pain in the slipcast

of his face. It was quiet it snuck it’s way into him,

as if it pounced on him when he looked away.

God, if I’d known there was a part of my life that

was related to what made him suffer. I would

have been better about it, I would have been sorry, like I am now.

Looking back, I wish he would have

told me. He was ashamed, I would have cupped

his face in my hands and told him, don’t be ashamed.

You did nothing wrong, to survive is never wrong–

I love you. You are the brother my heart chose, you

are the brother my heart chose. 

This is a bit of an experiment ^_^. I’m trying to breathe some life back into my long dry poetry well. I had an idea to write poems from the perspective of my characters from one character to another. I thought it would be a good way to show their bonds to one another. I worry they might be a little over-wrought emotionally, I always worry about that with my poetry.

It feels very right to have Calix poem to/about Riodan be the first one. Their relationship is one of the first and one of the most driving forces of the novel. The poem is about the damage Riodan that is the catalyst for his character arc. The poem has Calix having a hindsight and some point of view he might not have in story proper.  I hope you like it!

Oh and suggested musical accompaniment: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9tKBqJIfqPo&index=5&list=PL6ACE59988DC25193

This song is fantastic and really help inspire the piece, it’s not mine though the song is by Max Richter and features Sara Leonard

Hayley ^_^


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